Tuesday, March 28, 2006

Porokeeya-3

Jwor hole jemon gaa myaj myaj kore aaj sokal theke Laxman er thik serokom i laagchhilo. Jwor er ga gorom achhe, kintu koshto nei. Tar bodole saara shoreer-e, mone adbhut ek utttejona. Anka (math) poreekkhar age onke kNacha poreekharti'r jemon hoi onekta serokom. SomoY jeno aar kaatchhilo na taar. Nishachar er motoi diner aalo taar osojhyo laagchhilo. Eibhabei kokhon sokal goRhiye dupur naamlo, Laxman er monei chhilona. Hothaat poschim akash kaalo kore megh ghoniye elo. GuRh guRh kore megh deke uthlo, bidyut chomoker motoi muhurter modhye taar sara shoreer e sihoron khele gelo, buk er modhye mohadev er dugdugi bajano shuru holo. Kalidas tokhono jonmaan ni, nahole Laxman thik Meghdut aoraato.

Ektu porei jhomjhomiye brishti shuru holo. Du haat baRhiye jol er fNota anubhab korlo Laxman. Sheetal jol er chNoya peye Josna'r komol twak er kotha taar mone poRhlo, Kalidas er motoi kobi hoye gelo se. Nijer mone monei likhe fello..

Tomai chNuye,
Mon naachlo mayur hoye|
uRhei gelo moner khora
Golpo hoye|

Naamle jokhon ojhor dhaare,
buk er maajhe dhukpukuni
Megh gorjon fNaka maaThe,
Bishwamitra den bokuni|

Tomai chhaRha hriday amaar
kochu-chushi, futifata
Tomai chNuye mone amaar
uthlo fute podmokNataa|

Brishti thamar por, aaste aaste andhaar naamlo, aar taar songe Laxman er mon er andhaar dur hote laaglo. Seeta khabar poribeshoner por gograas-e kheyei 'ghure aaschhi' bolei uttorer opekkha na korei chhutlo se. Ram o Seeta khoniker jonyo hotobhombo hoye eke oporer dike takalo. Tarpor tader bismito drishti aaste aaste prem purna kotakkhe porinoto holo. Laxman er kotha bhhule giye tarao gograase khaoa shuru korlo!

Twarit pod-e Laxman chhutlo buRho bot gachher dike. Sekhane giye dekhlo taar preyosee aaj shwet bostro poridhaan korechhe. Ekti bostroi koushole nimnango o urdhange'r lojja nibaron korchhe. Komor theke anchol shuru hoye urdhango abrito kore, gota dui paak khbar por golodeshe odrishyo hoye gechhe (onekta 'halter neck style' e). Sundarir shyam anger upor ei subhra poshaak ek monorom asamanjasyer srishti korechhe. Nijeke aar samlaate na pere Josnar kajol kalo chokh e chokh rekhe aar aar taar dui haat er chompakoli'r moto angul alto kore dhore, godogodo konThe Laxman bollo

'Priye, tumi amaar dhrubatara
bNaachbo na aar tomaY chhhaRha|'

Songe songe shihorito hoye Josna haat chhariye lojjaboti lota'r moto kNukre giye ghaaRh eliye bollo 'jah'! Tarpor podmokoli jemon kore fote, temon kore aaste aaste matha unchu kore, Laxman er chokh er dike takiye bollo

'Tumi amaar rosik nagor
tomaar chokh duto ki dagor dagor!'

Ei bhabe aaro nanan ajouktik, athacha prempurno bakyalap chollo besh kichukkhon. Tarpor abar dekha korar pratushruti diye Laxman fire elo kutir e. Proti raate Laxman o Josna'r milan ek i jaigai, ek i somoY e hote laaglo. Tader prem chandrakalar motoi dheere dheere bikashito holo. Obosheshe purnima'r du din age Josnake jonmojonmantorer bandhone bandhaar akansha porkaash korlo Laxman. Josna abdaar korlo tader dui atmaar milan jeno shuklapokkher shesh, orthaat purnimaar dinei hoi. Laxman o haasi mukhe raaji holo.

Purnashashi'r ashai Laxman er praan jol-heen maachh, moni-heen foni, o biRhi-heen raajmistri'r motoi chhotfot korte laaglo. Rater bela ghum elo na, kintu diner belai diba swopno dekhte laaglo. Obosheshe bohu kankhito purnima elo. Sokla thekei Laxman er mon uttejonai togbogiye futchhilo. Onekdin pore se matha'r jota khule bhalo kore snaan korlo. Gaye holud debaar to keu chhilo na, tai nijei polee maati mekhe setar obhaab purno korlo.

Eksomoi sokal goRhiye dupur, ebong dupur goRhiye bikel holo. Gaachh er chhaYai bose thakte thakte hothat jhimuni elo Laxman er. Bohudiner anidra ke se aar eRhiye jete paarlo na. Gobheer ghum e nimagna hoye glo. Tar por pub akaashe chaand uthlo. Laxman er shanto, somahito mukh jyotsnai maakhamakhi hoye gelo, tobuo Josna ke deyoa pratushruti'r kotha taar obocheton mon ke naRha dilo na. Edike buRho bot gaachh er tolai beder meye chhotfot korte laaglo. Bon er poshu paakhi rao odhoirhyo hoye uthlo, kintu Laxman ghum aar bhanglo na. Chaand aaste aaste prai modhyo gogone pouchhe gelo, gaachh er patara dirghoshwash fele, jhimiye poRhlo, ekta pNyacha birokto hoye deke uthlo 'bhut bhutum, but bhutum'. Shobdo shune Laxman er kaal nidra bhanglo. Chokh kochle ghum theke uthe, akasher dike takiyei poRhi mori kore chhutlo se.

Laxman er podoshobdo shune niraash, upekkhita Josnar mone punarai ashaar sanchar holo, hridjontro sobege cholte shuru korlo. Nijeke aar samlaate na pere du bahu baRhiye chhutlo se, podoshobder utsa lokshyo kore. Laxman jokhon prai bot gaach er tolai ese gechhe, tokhon dekhlo ek bishaalkriti, bhishandarshana, krishnaangi taar dike du baahu baRhiye, chokkhu mudito kore, ostho-odhor kunchito kore chhute aaschhe. Laxman er mone muhurter modhye preyosee Josnar jonye ashanka o nijer pran bhoi er sanchar holo. Khipra gati te nijer asi ber kore naak keete dilo rakshahi'r. Jaante o paarlo na ei rakshasi-i asole taar priyotoma Josna.

Josna'r asole porichoY nischoi ekhon sokole bujhte perechhhen. Hain ini i sei bikhyato Raban bhagini Surpanakha.



Surpanakha proti Shuklapokkhe manobi ebong, krishnapokkhe Rakshasi'r rup dharan korto. Karon taar baba chhilen Rishi, ebong maa Rakshashi. Meyer opor khushi hoye Bishraba bor o diyecchhilen, se jodi Shuklapoksher shesh din kono manush ke bhalobese chumban dei, tahole chirotore manush rup paabe. Kintu hai re bidhata!

Surpankha kshubdho, apamanito hoye Laxman ke aar kono byakhya daan na korei kNaadte kNaadte soja Lankai fire giyechhilo. Er por er ghotona to sobaar jaana. Balmiki Ramayan e Rakshash jaati ke chhoto dekhano'r jonyo onek ghotonai paalte diyechhilen, jemon uporokto kahini ti. Kintu er por Ramayan e jaa lekha achhe, ta motamuti satya. Sudhu bechara Laxman er kotha aar keu lekheni. Juge juge Laxman er atripta atma ei prithibite Lokkhon, Lokha, Lakheendar, Lachhman probhriti naame jonmo niyechhe, ebong aaj o Dandakaranya theke Sunderbon, baa Kaaziranga theke Ulubon er jongole jongole preyosi ke khunje berachhe ei gaan geye geye.

15 comments:

Bishu said...

Jiyo mama....baal-miki ekta asto baul( amra chaal-ke boli chaul ) Nahole ei hu-hu prem-r goppa-ta Ramayon-e censor hoye.

Arthur Quiller Couch said...

"biRhi-heen raajmistri'r motoi chhotfot korte laaglo"

Ei ekta upoma-tei kaat. E to mohot protibha

HutumpaNcha said...

saadhu!!

Anonymous said...

bheri gud hoyechhe dada.

Ron said...

Bah!! Supornokha'r ki deadly ek khana chobi ber korechen!! Oshadharon!! Post ta ekebare completely worth the wait!!!!

Bonatellis said...

ufff, lom-horshok ;)

Kele Panchu said...

Bishu,aqc, hutum, ebong hutum,

Onek dhonyobad!

Ron,
Bilomber ek matro karon kintu bisudddha lyad. :)

Bona,
Thanku!

Anonymous said...

bhalo bhalo lath na kheye aro kota lekho:)

Kele Panchu said...

Dipasoke,
Tumi foske giyechhile, dhonyobaad!

HostiShabok,
Tothastu :)

thalassa_mikra said...

Ishh, amaar aage anekei "biRhi-heen rajmistri" upoma-tar jonyo shadhubaad diye phelechhey. Kintu, shotti, ki chomotkar upoma diyechhen, durdanto!

Aar Shurpanakha-r jonyo aamaar Ramayan porey khub dukkho hoto. Aha rey, premey porey bechara-r ei niyoti! Amaar motey Ramayaney Shurpanakha aar Rabon er moto tragic figure aar tritiyo keu nei. Tao to Buddhadeb Basu Rabon-key ektu manobik korey tul-len taar kabye. Shurpanakha ke niye to ekhono keu kichhui lekhe ni. Aapni prothom.

Kele Panchu said...

T_M
Surpanakha'r golpo Rajshekhar babu likhechhen 'smritikatha'Y. Ekhono jodi naa poRhe thako, oboshyoi poRhe niyo.
Golper maajher diker koyekta line tule dichhi..tokhon Rabon maara gechhe Bibhishan Lanka'r raaja.

Pushkala (bibhishaner meye) proshno korlen, 'achha pisimaa, tumi rishi kheycchho?'

mukhe abaar 25 khili paan pure, Surpanakha bollen, 'amaade baap mahamuni Bishraba rishi khaoa pochhondo korten na. Chhotolok rakkhosera naramangsa bhalobaase, kintu aamra raajbopngsher meyepurush boRho ekta khetim na. Tobe kono manusher opor beshi chote gele taake bhokkhon kortm ar pujoparbone nikumbhila debisthaaane naraboli diye sei pobitra mangso khetum.. ami baar 5 ek rishi kheyechhi, chhibRhe boro beshi.."

Persona non gratis said...

Ramayaner ei interpretation pode enlightened.

Bongo Naari said...

Bepok gappo dada!!! Fatiechen to!!!

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