Wednesday, January 18, 2006

Oboidho Pronoi

(Ei rochona poribar age Ramayan er bishesh koriya Kiskindhya kander jNyan thaka aboshyok, jNahara
  • Ramayana
  • poren naai, tNahader anurodh koritechhi poribaar jonyo.)

    Moharaani Tara Kishkindhyar ek amrHa brikkher shakhai e mukh amrHa koriya bosiya achhen. Shorotkaal shesh hoiyachhe, hemonter agomone amrHa gachher pata ekti duiti koriya jhoriya poritechhe. Maajhe maajhe utture thanda haoar jholok asitechhe aar raani'r mon hu hu koriya uthitechhe. Soptodibos purbe Ramchandra onyai bhaabe poschat hoite akromon koriya Tara's swami Bali ke hotya koriyachhen. Aaro soptodibos otikrom korile raani'r oshouch purna hoibe. Raani nimnange kochu pata ebong urdhange kolmi shak er mala poriya bhobishyot er kotha bhabitechhen. tNaar daan hoste ordho-bhokshyo kosha peyara ebong baam hosto nijo mostoke ukun bachhite byasto. Boidhobyer aage raani porone podmo patar sukkho poshak ebong golai draksha lota'r (angur) maala bhinno onyo kichhu poridhaan koriten na. Boidhobyer aro nana anushangik reeti o rani ke mumurshu koriya tuliyachhe. Ashouch er choturdosh dibos raani'r amlo ba madhur fol khaoa nishedh! Raani tNaar priyo kul, tointul emon ki sadharon lyakrHa amro porjonto chakhiya dekhite paren na. Ekhon khabar jonyo sudhu kodoli ebong kosha peyara.

    Pathok/pathikara bhabitechhen purkaale 'peyara' ki bhabe asillo! Se to Portuguese der obodaan. Bhhul dharona.

    Bibaher por Bali, Tara ke proshno korilo "Priye tumi madhuchandrima kothai korte chao?"
    Prem e godogodo hoiya Tara bolilo "Dure kono ek nirjon dweep e niye cholo, jekhane eto banor er hup hup shunte hobe na."
    Totkhonat Bali sodyobibahito stree e bogoldaba koriya ek lomfe Maldweep e asiya pNohuchhilo. Maldweep er sumishto kochi daab er jol, ebong sumadhur narikel khaiya tader din katite lagilo. Erokom i ek din jokhon Tara upol upokul e jolkreerHa koritechhilo, ekti swornoborno fol taar hoste bhasiya asilo. Lobh songboron na korite pariya raani sei fol e kamorH dilo. Totkhonyat tahar onge onge ek opurbo anondotorongo kheliya gelo ebong rani'r laangul (lej) swobhabjaato gune kujjhatika somo dulite lagilo! Apatoshanto upokul er jolorashi sei narHa khaiya bikkhubdho hoiya uthilo. Somudrer eheno oshanto rup dekhiya Bali narikel brikkho hoite swotwor namiya asilo ebong tworitpod e rani'r someepe asiya jiggasilo "ki hoyechhe amaar mukhpurHi sona, eto paglaami korchho keno?". Tara shanto hoilo, ebong Bali ke ordhobhokshyo fol ti dekhaiya obhimani konthe bolilo "Amaar erokom aro fol chai! Tumi jotokkhon na erokom fol ene dichho ami aar Kishkindhyai firchhi na." Bali chintito hoiya bolilo "Kintu odike rajkarjyo to sob fele reekhe esechhi..." Sfeeto mukh abhimaan e aaro sfeeto koriya banori lej jhaptaiya bolilo "Rajkarjyo na chhai, bolo kiskindhya'r juboti banori der na dekhe tomar mon anchaan korchhe. Natun biye kora bou er samanyo onurodh tuku o rakhte paaro na? Ei tomaar bhalobasa?" ebong chaar pod ( ba chaar hosto) chhoraiya kNadite lagilo. Samudrer lobonakto jol ebong ashru jol mishiya ekakaar hoiya gelo. Bibroto hoiya Bali bolilo "Aha kNaadchho keno? Ami to michhi michhi bolechhi. Tomar jonyo ami fol keno, puro gaachh uprHe niye chole aasbo."

    Tahar por Bali, Maldweep er opor prante asilo, ebong teebro bege chhutiya prokando ek laaf dilo, ebong pNohuchhilo Somdeshe (jaa ekhonkaar Somalia). Somdesh hoite Bali poschim paane lafaite lafaite cholio. (Purkaale Sahara marubhumi chhilo na, tokhon puro Africa ghono jongolabrito chhilo). Poth e lemur, gorilla probhriti banor der porajito korilo kintu sei suswadu fol er sondhaan pailo na! Ek somoi abar samudra asilo ebong Bali abar mohalomfo dilo eibaar pNohuchhilo Amrojoni (jaa ekhonkaar naam Amazon) er gobhir jongole. Sotosohosro brikkho tonno tonno koriya khujiya o Bali sei fol er sondhan pailo na. Obosheshe bhognomonoroth hoiya poschim er bodole uttar dike cholite lagilo. Eksomoi abar jol dekhiya Bali hotash hoilo ebong hotash hoiya ekti brihot brikkhe choriya bosilo. KIntu sei brikkho hoite Bali dekhite pailo onotidur e ekti pingol dweepmaala biraaj koritechhe. Natun udyam e Bali abar lafailo ebong sei dweep e asilo jaar naam Korobi (ekhon jaar naam hoyiachhe Caribbean). Korobi dweep er banorgon lokmukhe (ba banor mukhe) Bali'r amitbol ebong taar asar hetu shuniyacchhilo, tai tahara bina juddhe atmosomorpon korilo ebong upodhoukon hisabe Bali ke sei sumishto fol er jhuri ebong koyekshoto chara gaach dilo. Somoyer opochoy na koriya Bali koyekshoto khudro ebong koyek ti brihot lomfe abar nobobodhur kachhe uposthit hoilo. Kiskindhyai firiya duijone miliya sei char gachh guli raaj prangone pNutilen. Bali'r ei abhinobo prem ba rashtrobhasai 'Pyar' er ei drishtanto swarup ei fol er naam hoilo 'peyara'. jNara Balir lomfonshokti somporke bindumatro sondeho prokaash koritechhen tNader jene rakha dorkar Nikhil-bishwo lomfon protijogitai, Mohabeer Hanuman, Bali'r kache go-haran hariyachhilo.

    Jaha houk boromaan e Tara jokhon peyara chorbon koritechhen, brikkhotole kichhu onugoto banor, banori monmora hoiya tahader nitombo chulkaitechhe. Balir mrityu'r por beshir bhag das dasi i Tara ke borjon koriyachhe, rohiyachhe matro uporokto koyekjon. AEmon somoi 'hoop hoop' koriya ek sudarshan banor brikkhotole asilo. Das dasigon traysto hoiya pash er sheyorHa gachhe uthilo ebong moharaani byatibyasto hoiya poroner kochu pata dhakilen. Ei sudarshan banor ke ta nischoi pathok pathika gon bujhiyachhen: ini holen Tarar debor Sugreeb. Greeba uthaiya Sugreeb Tarar dike drishtinikkhep korilo ebong bolilo "Bouthan, tomar songe kichhu kotha achhe, ektu niche aasbe?" Khipto hoiya banori uttar dilo "Omon dyab dyab kore upor dike cheye achho keno? Dekhchho na, ami shudhu kochu pata pore achhi? Nirlojjo, behaya kothakar. Ja bolar okhan thkei bolo, ami niche aaschhi na. Dashu'r byata Remo ke diye amar Shib er moto bor taake merechho, ebar amake o mere felo. Amaar aar ei jibon rekhe ki laabh? Ogo amar ki hobe go..." Boliya banori ojhor dharai kNadite lagilo. Sugreeb tokhon 'hup' koriya ek lomfo diya Tara'r pasher shakhai e bosilo ebong duikhani amrHa potro chNiriya jotno sohokaare taar chokh muchhaiya dilo. "Aha ja hobar to hoye gechhe, esob niye abar kanna kati korchho keno? Dada o to onyai bhabe amake rajyo theke ber kore diyechhilo! Sob i to jaano tumi. Aar tomar chhele amar bhaipo Angad i to amar pore raja hobe! Ami oke chheler moto dekhi." Sugreeb bolilo. Ektu shanto hoiya banori bolilo "Tahole ki dorkar?" Shuniya Sugreeb er lej lojjai kundolito hoiya gelo, greeba anoto hoilo. Bahu prochestrar por banor shaos sonchoi koriya boliya felilo "Ami tomai be korbo". Shuniya Tara hotobhombo hoiya gelo ebong tin lomfe brikkher sorbochho shakhai e uthiya bosilo. Tahar por roshkoshayito noyone Sugreeb ke dekhiya kohilo "MukhporHa, hotochharHa rakkhos (manushya somaj e jemon 'janoar' boliya galigalaj deyoa hoi, banor somaj e temon i rakkhos)! Tor lojja kore na, ami na tor boudi hoi, tor mayer soman? Eto gulo bou niye o tor hoi na, abar amake chaas? Janisna amar sholo bochhor er ek chhele achhe? Tor mukhe agun, tor nyaj e agun" Bibroto hoiya Sugreeb bolilo "Aha tumi jemon bhabchho temon noi! Ami ki tomar songe 'iye' korbo bole biye korte cheyechhi? Amar to onyo oenk bou i achhe, dekhte sobai dushtu mishti kintu mukh khullei kichir michir beriye porHe. Keu tomar moto 'Ashrom shikkhita' noi. Janoi to ekhon manush der rajotyo, tai Sanskrit na jaanle kaaj cholbe ki kore? Tomaake ami Paat Raani kore rakhbo. Aaar ami jokhon Lonkai giye juddho korbo tokhon ke rajyo chalabe bolo? Tumi chhara erokom buddhimoti, bidushi romoni aar ke achhe?" Taha'r jokhon alpo boyos tokhon Tara'r pita tahake ashrom e pathaiyachhilen, manush jaatir bhasha ebong adob kaida sikhibar jonyo. Khub seemito banor er bhagyei erup shikkha jutito abong taha lohiya Tara'r gorbo o chhilo. Sugreeb er stuti shuniya Tara'r boyos-bharakranto sheethil ston-jugal khonik er jonyo sfeeto hoiya abaar ashonkai sheethil hoiya gelo. kohilo "Kintu lok e ki bolbe? E je oboidho somporko!" Sugreeb byasto hoiya bolilo "Na na, sesob chinta koro na, ami sobar songe poramorsho agei kore rekhehhi, Angad ke o ektu ektu abhaas diyechhi, or o apotti nei." Tokhon Banori kichhukkhon bhabiya bolilo "Amar kichhu shorto achhe". Sugreeb bolilo "Ki shorto Debi?" "Amar age je tNetul gaachh tai bichhana chhilo seta ferot chai, tomar onyo raani der khali korte bolbe. Roj sokaal e Singhopuri (Singapore) kola chai, dupur e Brindavan er tNetul chai (jNara janen na tNader jonyo: Brindavan e purbe prachur tNetul brikkho chhilo, poroborti kaale Radhika obhisaar e jaibar somoi paa pichhlaiya porate sob tNetul gaach so-mule uchhed kora hoiyachhilo) aar shobar age narkel er dudh chai, lej e makhbo." Sugreeb bolilo "Sob i thik achhe, kintu Singhopuri kola kothai paabo? Singhopur to onek dur!" dNaat khNichaiya banori bolilo "Keno tomar bandhu Honu to achhe, shunechhi to se khub bhalo laaf dei. Amar bor amar jonyo sudur Korobi dweep theke peyara ene diyechhilo, aar tumi ei tuku o anate parbe na?" Sugreeb trastyo hoiya bolilo "thik achhe, thik achhe. Aar kicchu?" Tara Greeba helaiya bolilo "Aar ektu bhalo kore biyer prostaab ta daao dekhi" Sugreeb swastir ni:shwash feliya gola khNakari diya korojorHe nibedon korilo "He banori shrestha, tumi rup e ononya. Tomar kaalo mukh er kalima amabasyar nishi ke o haar manai. Narikel dugdha sebito tomar lej er chakchikya sara jombudweep er alochyo. Tomar uchha shikkha banor somaj er gorbo. Sudhu taai noi, tumi beer-gorbhya. Angad er moto putra je laabh korbe se oti bhagyobaan. He moharaani tumi doya kore ei odhom er lej grohon koro" Shuniya preeto hoiya Tara Sugreeb er paane kotakkhe chahilo, ebong ador koriya tahar lej er pranto Sugreeb er mukhe bulaiya bolilo "Achha".

    26 comments:

    Anonymous said...

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    Ron said...

    Ki shanghatik!!

    Rimi said...

    uff! uff! ekebare fatiye diyechho! 'lojjai kundolito'--ki expression! kintu dada, tumi directly bangla okkhore lekho na keno? sheta toh kora jai, aami jotodur jani...please? ingriji okkhore bangla, tao kina tomar romyo-rochona, boro koshto hoi.

    Anonymous said...

    eto kothin angla likhte ke sikhieche? jano na amar moton kichu boka hati ache ei jogote?:)

    Dipanjan Das said...

    Sugreeb er stuti shuniya Tara'r boyos-bharakranto sheethil ston-jugal khonik er jonyo sfeeto hoiya abaar ashonkai sheethil hoiya gelo. - mairi ki cinematography!

    kichhu porer episode o chai.

    Kele Panchu said...

    Hatir chhaana, ota ki hunkaar na bringhon?

    Ron, sanghatik maane ki dNaat bhenge jachhe? Sorry :(

    Rimi, amar Bangla haat er lekha khhub kharap, tai likhte bhoi kore :( KIntu pore kotokgulo ekkebaare sohoj bhashai likhbo, North Calcutta style e.

    DD, er pore to judho lege jabe! Amar kolponashokti oto bhalo noi. "Lokkhoner Shoktishel" naam e ekta natok achhe, jodi na pore thako porte paaro, besh mojar.

    Kele Panchu said...

    Hatir chhaana, 'angla' likhte ami ekhono shikhini! Ota bujhi hati der bhasha? :)

    Dipanjan Das said...

    haan lokkhoner shoktishel poreochhi dekheochhi. north calcutta style er golpor jonyo opekkha korbo.

    Anonymous said...

    Hati bole ki amra manush na? pechone laga eto ashpordha?

    expiring_frog said...

    Kahini shotyi shanghatik. Bidhobar shokochchhash oti mormantik. Premik-er peyara-shondhan romanchokor. Aar sheshe biyer prostab jake bole phataphati.

    Bangalider jemon bangla, hatider bodh hoy hyangla. Ontoto oder khaoar bohor dekhe tai mone hoy.

    Anonymous said...

    hehehee... panchu...

    bhalo naam rekhechis sala....
    sala wing-e bolish ni keno etodin je erokom ekta mohot kaaj korchis etodin dhore...

    neways chaliye jaaaa... amra achi tor sathey immortal support deowar janye..

    bhutz.

    Kele Panchu said...

    Byang bhai,
    Shokochhas shobdoti amar khub bhalo laaglo! Aar Hatira hyangla hobe se to jana kothai. Kyangla hati ami ekhono obdi dekhini.

    Anamik,
    Tumi kon wing er kotha bolchho? Left na right? Football bhison maramari'r khela hoye dNariyechhe, tai kono wing ei ami khelina. Tobe 'support' debar jonyo dhonyobaad!

    Ron said...

    Shudhdho bangla byapaarta ektu difficult theek ki. Kintu "shanghatik"shei jonno boli ni...oi bali'r lapha laphi ittyadi besh shanghatik laaglo..tai :).

    durdanto likhecho!! tobe bangla okhkhore likhle shotti khub shubidhe hoye, eto shudhdho bangla ingriji horofe pora beshi kothin.

    Kousik said...

    just byapok!

    HutumpaNcha said...

    Uff..podte podte choshma bhnege gelo..eeto uutkorshomaner rochona poodar shookh thakle ki hobe, daruun koshtokor byapar.

    jahahok, daarun likehecho. ritimoto choobir moto "amrHa brikkher daal e mukh amrHa koriya bosiya achhen", "dekhte sobai dushtu mishti kintu mukh khullei kichir michir beriye porHe"

    Propose korar ki style, sugreeb ke amaar daaler sondhan ta dio, pl
    Sadhu, Sadhu...

    dwaipayan said...

    prothom visit amar. aar ami fn hoye gechi....

    dwaipayan said...

    aar tomai amar list e add kore nilam

    Kele Panchu said...

    Ron,
    Mac e Bangla horof er kono support nei. Ami anander songe anandabazar o porte parina, lekha to durer kotha.

    /<0USIK,
    Onek dhonyobaad. Tomar tola chhobi guli o nayonabhiram. Baki der o onurodh korchhi dekhar jonyo.

    Hutum,
    Amar ekhan theke Kiskindhya onek dur. Kintu tumi jekhane thako (Chennai to?) taar thik pashei (Mysore). Okhane na pele Wrishyamukh porbote (Neelgiri/Ooti) khunje dekhte paaro. Sugreeb er songe dekha hole amar torof theke onake pronaam janiyo. Ferar pothe Mithun daa ke amar lekha ta poriyo, jodi uni er opor ekta 'cinema' banate paren tahole ami badhito hobo!

    Dwaipayan,
    Amar lekha porar jonyo ebong amake talikabhukto korbaar jonyo onek dhonyobaad.

    M (tread softly upon) said...

    shudhyo bangla porte shomoy lagleo purota pore nirmol anondo upobhog korlam. Oshadharon kolpona shokti, opurbo lekhon. chaliye jao....

    J. Alfred Prufrock said...

    Baapdhon, loho pronaam!

    J.A.P.

    HutumpaNcha said...

    @panchu da:tomar..ees..mane aapnar suggestion pode totkhotnaat moneer aanonde 'hoot hoot' gaite gaite wrishyamukh porbote'r dike paakha mele dilam. Jobe theke Sugreeb'er prostab ta podechi moneer paakha to maalai aache..aar ki, thikanatar oopekhai chilam, sheta tumi diye dile

    sekhane pouche eedik oodik eedale oodale trroosto hoye hobu priotom ke khuujchi,cookhe poode gelo eek sudorshon purush.ki chehara,joouboner uuchaash, aajanu lombito kesh, uujool gourborno..aaha..

    dekhei to peechle gelam o shootan neecher dale land koorlam. taar kaalo choosmai dhaka cookah'er shoonge amaar daabdabe potolchera cokher milon hotei bujhe gelam eei shei moha purrush mohanayak mithun'er shuuputro-mohakshay. jeemni gaal bhora naam, teemni greek type'r chehara.

    baina dhore dilam, tomar shonge tomar baba'r boiye naambo.
    jai na bola she eek praan kapano huunkar, eei shalaaa, baba maat bol, mithun bol, mithun, baap hoga sala tera, mere liye baas mithun. (aha a ki oonai kotha, jani je mother is a reality while father is a belief, taha holao eebhabe, shoobar shaamne, eesh)

    uff, ki gola, aby o taar baby loojai gola chepe phelebe...

    hrodoyer kompon. mooner aabeg,daanar phorphorano aar nookli bhuurur koompon shamle neeye proostab ta diye pflaam: mithun'dar shonge deekha korbo.

    aagami puurnimaar din mithundar shonge amar appo fix hoye geche. tomar goolpo, mohakshay hero aar (danaar konata loojai daath diye cheepe) ami heroine. mithun'da ke koom kore ekta ghonta-du-aeker guest appearence'er moto role'r baabostha kore diyo kintu.

    tumi likhe nao ami totodin ooty'r phule phule daale daale mohakshay'er shonge disco dance'r practish ta kode nei

    Kele Panchu said...

    M,
    Onek dhonyobaad! Er por ekta chhotokhato likhbo!

    JAP,
    Apnaar podosporshe amar blog dhonyo holo!

    Hutum,
    Bujhlaam! Tahole Sugreeb punorjonmo laabh kore 'Mimo' hoye esechhe! Sadhu sadhu! Tomar anusondhan swarthok hoyeche jene khushi holam. Asha kori Mimo o tomar cinema 'Disco Dancer' er jonopriyota keo haar manabe. DD aar byang bhai musci debe. Sudhu ekjon nrityo porichalok er dorkar. Cinema hit hole amake o royalty'r taka diyo. Ota ami 'reserach and development' er kaaj e lagabo. Maane aaro bhalo kore lekhar jonyo ekta computer kinbo! Mithun dar guest role to achhei. Onak Ram, Lokkhon emon ki Hanuman er role ta diyo. Sugreeb er baba hisabe hanuman er role ei bhalo manabe. Tomar Taroka jibon sofol hok, ei asha kori!

    Bonatellis said...

    bhobitobyo, bhobitobyo !!!
    na holey tumi blog-e .....

    HutumpaNcha said...

    panchuda: aponar ekti paat pujor blog ache dekhiya prito hoilam. kintu taha je khujiya pailam na!!

    ootibo dukher shonge tyaatul deshe sesh mesh idli sambhar diya kaaj sharte holo :(
    eei rup loobh dekhano ki oochit? robibaarer diprahoorik bhoojta mathe mara gelo..

    Kele Panchu said...

    Bona,
    Sob i tNar ichchhe :) Tobe eto beshi tel diyo na, janoto 'sneho oti bishom bastu!'

    Hutum,
    Onekdin dhore pet pujor blog 'khuRho'r kol' hoyechhilo, ekhon ota te ekta post korlaam. Dekho, kaaje laage kina!

    Nibaron,
    Tomar bandha chhondo
    pore pelaam anondo!

    Anonymous said...

    apni to khub rasik manush dada! khub bhalo laglo pore.