(Jamini Roy)Dondokaranye ekhon dupur duto. Roder tej ekhono komeni, tobe jongol ghono hobar jonyo, besh ekta thanda thanda bhaab achhe. Bishaal bishaal gaachher gNuRhi'r fNaak diye maajhe maajhe surya lukochuri khelchhe. Kichhu kichhu jaigai khapchhaRha bhaabe jongol kete bosobaaser upojogi kore tola hoyechhe, onekta 'Italian saloon' e chul katano mathar moto. Dondyokaranye bishaal kono pahaRh naa thakleo, chhoto khaato pathorer Dhipi baa, tila jatiyo unchu jaiga ektu lokhyo korlei dekhte paoa jaabe.
Emon E ekta chhoto Dhipi'r opor bose buno ghaas chebate chebate, Laxman bhabchhe, "Shaala, ei bhaddor maas er gorome, kono bhoddorlok ei jongole baas kore?" Maajhe maajhei Laxman er mone priyotoma Urmi'r protichchhobi bhese uthchhe ar purono kotha bhebe mon kemon korchhe.
Dadake praanadhik bhalobaasleo bou ke chheRhe jongol asar kono ichhei taar chhilo na. Kintu buRho bhaam Balmiki ta naaki dada'r jonmer agei dada ke niye ekta 'Novel' likhe rekhechhe! Sei golpe lekha achhe, Laxman keo songe jete hobe, ebong swastreek noi, eka! "Amaar to mone hoi, maalta ekebaare 'fraud', 'novel' likhcchhe na kina ke jaane? Ekhon to kaukeei poRhte dichhe na. Lok-e bole buRhota joubon kaale jongole dakati korto aar gNaat kaat to, ekhon bhol paalte sadhu hoyechhe! Aar baap taao bolihaari mairi! Mejo maa'r anchole ekkebare bandha." Laxman bhabchhilo.
Koikeyee'r achoron e Laxman ebong taar baaki tin bhai jarpornai asontushto hoyechhilo, ebong bahubibahoi sob noshter mul nirdharon kore shopoth niyechhilo keu ekaadhik biye korbe na. Rojkaar moto, aaj o eisob akashpatal bhabte bhabte Laxman er somoi kaatchhilo. Emon somoi naari-konThe uchhaswar e khilkhil haasi, jol jhaptaano'r awaj aar kotha bhese elo "Ei ki korcho, ki korchho? hi hi hi hi hi...dushtu kothakar!" Eisob shune Laxmaner chintasrote bighno ghotlo ebong tiRhik kore rokto mathai uthe gelo! Tiktoswar e biRhbiRh kore bollo "Nyakamo dekhle ar baanchi na! Joto din jachhe toto prem jeno uthle uthchhe! Jol er modhye foshtinoshti korbe to ektu dure giye korlei paaro! Jongole ki aar pukur chhilo na?"
Aaste aaste bikel goRhiye sandhya neme elo. Jongole sandhya naamte beshi deri hoi na. Taai akasher laal rong, kichhukkhon er modhyei kaalche hoye gelo. JhNi jhNi pokara jara saradin dhore gola poriskaar korchhilo, sujog peyei dol bNedhe kolotaan shuru korlo. Byang gulo o tader songe palla dite gaan shuru korlo. Aikataan ekebaare! Ei sur er sagor e obhaab chhilo shudhu ekjon tabalchi'r, kintu setar obhaab dur kortei bodh hoi keu kichhukkhon pore porei haat taali dicchhilo. Prothom prothom sei awaj shunle mone hobe kono taal jNyan heen lok bhhul jaigai taali dichchhe. Asole ta noi. Ei awaj holo Lazman er masha maaraar awaj! Aar mosha bole mosha, ki taar size, ek ekta jeno chhotokhaato choRhaai paakhi.
Besh kichchukkhon mosha'r kamoRh kheye Laxman birakta hoye taar priyo dhipi chheRhe uthe dNaralo. Ektu porei feu, hayena esob er aanagona shuru hoye jaabe, taai rojkaar moto aaj o se agun jwalano'r byabostha korlo. Kichhu shukno kaathkutho aar pata jogaRh kore chokmoki pathar koyekbaar ghostei agun lege gelo. Aaguner laalche aabhai, Laxman er bishanna, chintaklishta kapal er rekha suspashta hoye uthlo. Emon somoi kutir er modhye theke daak elo, 'thakurpo bhetore eso, bhaat beRhechhi'.
'Aaschhi boudi' bole Laxman kuteer e dhukte giye chaapa golai awaj pelo, 'Ei ki hochhe? Ekkhuni thakurpo ese jaabe!' Dorojaar baire ektu opekkha kore gola khNaakari diye Laxman bhitore dhuklo ebong hese prashna korlo 'aaj ki ranna hoyechhe boudi?' Seeta bollo 'aaj? ol bhaate aar horiner mangso'. Mone mone Laxman bhablo 'uff, aajkeo horiner mangso!' Mukhe bollo 'o jeta dada ager shukkur baar merechhilo? Shunechhi horiner maangso joto din jaai, toto suswadu hoi. Daao daao aamaar aar twar soichhe na!'
12 comments:
durdanto, dada, durdanto! eta pore sei college e thakte lekha mohakabyik parody natok gulo mone pore gyalo! Ei style tar abedon bodh hoy konodin o kombe na, taai na? ha ha ha. aro lekha chai ei rokom. :)
eto purono diner saptahik potrikar moto suspense.
ar naam ta aro byapartake bariye diyechhe.
dwitiyo kistir jonyo opekkha korchhi.
Amaar Bangla-te aajkaal kinchit jong dhorechhe, taai eto shundor Bangla rochona Ingriji okkhorey porhe khoob bhalo laaglo.
Aapni likhey jaan, mohashaihtyik, aami Desh potrika-e chhapa'r byabostha kortey cheshta korchhi.
Besh chobi chobi bhaab with appropriate sound effects: "Aikataan ekebaare! Ei sur er sagor e obhaab chhilo shudhu ekjon tabalchi'r, kintu setar obhaab dur kortei bodh hoi keu kichhukkhon pore porei haat taali dicchhilo"
Only one word: ooshadharon
part 2 kobe porbo:).osadharon imagination:)ramayan er golpo anek bar sunechi. ei angle ta kokhono mathay ase ni:)
SS,
Onek dhontobaad. Purono oitijhya baanchiye raakhtei esob likchhi.. :)
DD,
Ghoton ta pore kon dike jaabe sei niye ektu chintai achhi! Asole du tin te plot eksonge maathai ghurchhhe, dekhi Laxman er kaake pochondo hoi!
AQC (amader ek prof er ei initials chhilo),
Amaar blog e asar jonyo dhonyobaad! Desh e emon lekha chaaple Sagarmoy babu upar theke laaThi niye teRhe aasben!
Hutum,
Onek dhonyobaad. Tomaar daak taao oi Aikataan e juRhe dile bhalo hoto, bhhule gechhi!
Hatir chhana,
Part 2 pass korechho ki, je part 2 poRhbe? Aaar ota angle na 'hangle' ? :)
darun!
Part 2 ta likhun taratari Panchuda. Laxman er moton amar-o ar "twar" soiche na ... ;-)
daarun likhechen dada.aapnar ei shob ramayan mohabharoter gyan dekhchi shotti otuloniyo!!
apni to poranik goppe pray rajshekharbabu mane parasuram-er dwitiyo abatar.
parer bhag-er apekkhay roilam.
uff eta pore lakshamn er jonno emoni dukho hochhe ki bolbo :)) Eta dharabahik hobe to?
Kausik, Ron,
onek dhonyobaad!
Dipasoke,
Parashuram amaar gurusthaneeyo, onaar nokh er jugyi hote paarleo nijeke dhonyo mone korbo.
M,
Laxman er du:kho aapni bujhechhen dekhe bhalo laaglo! Amaar o boRho du:kho hoi chheletar jonyo. :(
ki r bolbo...just OSADHARON!!!!...tobe Laxman Dondokaranye ekta part time premika khuje nite parto...tumi ki bolo...bechara Laxman!!....edike onar adorer Dadabhai to Boudike niyei byasto,Balmiki ta na bechara Laxman-r sathe boddo unfair koreche!!....
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